For your English task today, we would like you to edit your letter before writing up a final version. Read through your letter so far. How could you make it even more persuasive? Maybe you could improve the persuasive language you have used. Make sure you check your spelling and punctuation. You could do your editing in a different coloured pen or pencil.
When you have edited your letter, write it up in neat. Make sure you remember to add the address of your recipient and your character (you can use your imagination for this one). Maybe you could tea stain some paper to write your letter up on.
We can’t wait to see your finished letters. Will you be persuasive enough to convince Judge John Bradshaw?