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Today, we would like you to try to improve some persuasive sentences using all the persuasive devises we have looked at so far. 

For example you might add a 'dare to disagree' expression, or powerful, persuasive adjectives or maybe add a rhetorical question. 


You will find a copy of the sentences to improve below along with a word mat which has some useful words and phrases. There is also a video in the 'Video Resource Centre' which models how to improve sentences by making them more persuasive. 


We look forward to seeing how persuasive you can be. 

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